DANCE OF THE SPIRITS
Surges of cosmic solar wind
unleash storms of unbridled ferocity
unleash storms of unbridled ferocity
Scattering
along celestial highways,
his raw energy alone could alter
his raw energy alone could alter
the
course of the known universe...
His intensity
has the ability
to play with their fragilities.
has the ability
to play with their fragilities.
It
took millenia of evlolutionary design
to fine tune codes with-in-finitesimal strands
to fine tune codes with-in-finitesimal strands
something he could wipe out in a single fiery rage!
But
it would take an eternity, or more
to
decipher secrets of life he could or would not share
Left
unchecked he is a recipe for cataclysmic disaster.
Always
complaining
that everything in life seemed unassailable
that everything in life seemed unassailable
thus
making himself unavailable
to the very thing that could quell
to the very thing that could quell
his
fiery temperament and desires.
Once
again, he was on a collision course to nowhere,
blazing trails
blazing trails
fully
charged and ready to explode,
Yet...
continually coming up against repelling forces
unable to get his satisfaction.
unable to get his satisfaction.
But
as fate would have it, he got the surprise of his life
when he surged right past that watery blue orb
he
thought was too small,
and insignificant to quench his inner fire.
and insignificant to quench his inner fire.
Instead
of putting up a counter force
she
rearranged her energy
to accommodate his oft' misinterpreted signals
to accommodate his oft' misinterpreted signals
...it
was a chance she had to take
in order to ignite
her own Divine Spark.
in order to ignite
her own Divine Spark.
It
was the only way she knew how to tame this unruly hot head
who
stubbornly clung to his own rules and laws
about how the universe should revolve around him!
about how the universe should revolve around him!
...Yielding, she accepts his potentially fatal flares,
transmuting his energy into a spectacular sight.
transmuting his energy into a spectacular sight.
Their magnetic sources merging
into an auroral display of purple and green light...
into an auroral display of purple and green light...
effectively
collapsing duality
for a moment of fulfilled desire.
for a moment of fulfilled desire.
Captured to forever be entranced in celestial dance. She--- bound tightly in a magnificent lover's embrace. He--- spell bound in the beauty he'd always missed with his eyes before.
ReplyDeleteJust what the truth is, they would sing evermore...as impassioned lovers, wrestle as one.
Very nice, Teresa!
my apologies for not responding to your amazing comment Dustup224.
ReplyDeleteYour comment is a piece of poetry in itself... just beautifully said as a true romantic would.
I am so glad that you could feel the passion and the fury of this celestial dance.
I remember when I wrote this a year ago now I was absolutely furious with someone, and I was comparing the situation with a solar burst... it was very personal at the time, and it's only now, a year later, after the storm passed so to speak that I could see past it.
I realized that sometimes opposing forces are necessary to make us look deeper within our own hearts and minds.
Thank you so much for getting this piece Leo. !
:D
DeleteHow brave and eternally wise she is.
ReplyDeleteTo surrender the ego and simply be, is what we all aspire to do, but seldom reach. Perhaps the perfect incentum is what it takes? A force of will instead of nature perhaps? A beautiful tale with the most perfect frame of music. How I will concentrate on anything after this is beyond me! You write some wicked poetry, Divinia <3<3<3
You Got it Nadia Meadows,
Deletemy good friend who watches the Northern lights
:D
OH, and thank you for saying such nice things about my poetry
♥ ♥ ♥
Finding yourself is a must!
ReplyDeleteThe journey I think is the most important and exciting part--- the good part and the never ending part, as you change ((sometimes I take with someone else and sometimes I go at alone, just like how I dance))
This was beautiful, very exciting and enjoyable with the music
I loved all the fire, stars and natural disaster
HA HA!! I LOVE your comment Ash. I really mixed this love story up with the perfect storm of fire, stars and Natural Disaster.
DeleteAnd I think what you say is importantly TRUE, that we need to dance alone at times..
Beautifully observed Ash, and thank you for your wonderful comment ♥
Hello and Hugs Divinia!
ReplyDeleteLady, you just stole my breath with the potency of this... cleverly wrought and emotionally intelligent.
My thoughts are dancing with inspiration.
♥
Thank you so much for your kind words here Sharonlee ♥ ((((hugs))))
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